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Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write.

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  • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

    Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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    @brianbilston

    Our love is a broken oatcake
    Today we shall make strudel
    The sky is darkening, and yet the dove
    Doth barely resembleth a poodle 🐩 😆

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    • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

      Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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      @brianbilston

      I see you forgot the fabric softener again
      As my socks crackle down the carpet in the hall
      And as for the blanket upon my favorite chair
      It’s caused the cat to stick upon the wall.

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      • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

        Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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        @brianbilston

        Where have you been?
        This is unbearable—please don’t go yet. Please don’t leave.

        I keep replaying it; I keep seeing it; I keep hearing it.
        I remember Newport; I remember Pagnell; I remember the bowl with the chipped rim—
        and I hate that I remember it so clearly.

        We said we would make things right this winter, and you listened, and I listened.
        But today the questions won’t stop: why now, why like this, why again?
        The sky keeps darkening—again and again—and I can’t tell if it’s the weather or me.

        I saw Carter. He called. I didn’t answer at first.
        I tried to steady myself, but the bleeding wouldn’t slow, and I was afraid to ask for help.
        I kept thinking, stay, just stay, and then the thought broke in half.

        I loved you—still do—and I hate how quickly love turns into something sharp.
        I forgot the simplest things; I forgot what I meant to say; I forgot what I promised.
        And then I remembered, all at once, and it felt worse.

        Please don’t turn this into another unfinished goodbye.
        If you can, come back. If you can’t, at least tell me the truth.
        Do you remember?
        Or am I the only one holding the chipped pieces and calling them a whole?

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        • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

          Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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          @brianbilston

          "I am a bowl, chipped at the rim
          Never to be filled up with cereal again by him
          No more will I be filled up with Captain Crunch all the time,
          He really should grow up and pick a different kind"

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          • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

            Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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            • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

              Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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              @brianbilston

              Please don't do that, it's disgusting!

              No! Don't smell that; you don't know where that's been

              Stop trying to lick that; I don't know the flavor of spleen -- don't ask again!

              Ack! Stop humming that! Now a sound worm is tunneling through my brain

              Why am I still dating him? Um, let me try to explain...

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              • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

                Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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                @brianbilston i love that first one....

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                • capnthommo@c.imC capnthommo@c.im

                  @brianbilston I want to know more of Carter and his ladder. Also, I too grieve for Newport Pagnell, swallowed up by the vastness that is Milton Keynes. But not as much as I do for Olney.😉

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                  @capnthommo These lines provide more questions than answers.

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                  • asprinkleofsage@mastodon.socialA asprinkleofsage@mastodon.social

                    @brianbilston ...or have you just made a new poem?

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                    @ASprinkleofSage I’ve no idea what I’ve done.

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                    • illetteratolettore@mastodon.unoI illetteratolettore@mastodon.uno

                      @brianbilston Gonna feed them to an AI or two and make a song

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                      @illetteratolettore There’ll be none of that now.

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                      • thejikz@infosec.exchangeT thejikz@infosec.exchange

                        @brianbilston
                        In the vaccum between when and how, I squat.
                        I saw a curiousity then, and now, I thought:
                        A free line or five or ten about chow, or nought
                        Why not add to them while I drop trow, on pot.

                        Cheers!

                        #poetry #shitpost

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                        @thejikz Thank you

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                        • gillinger@mas.toG gillinger@mas.to

                          @brianbilston
                          Ode to Disastrous Taste.

                          Me and you in matching tank tops
                          On the march to Ban the Bomb,
                          Early seventies brown and beige were
                          Worn by you with such aplomb.

                          I thank you!

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                          @Gillinger lovely stuff

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                            @Su_G You may be right

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                            • rvedotrc@tech.lgbtR rvedotrc@tech.lgbt

                              @brianbilston It's been a while since I wrote any poetry, and this probably demonstrates why that might be a good idea.

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                              @rvedotrc Thank you, Rachel, for finding a home for that line

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                              • tattie@eldritch.cafeT tattie@eldritch.cafe

                                @brianbilston
                                I am a bowl, chipped at the rim
                                A hairline crack running down to the base
                                Can I still contain all you ask of me?
                                Popcorn: yes, tomato soup? I don't know
                                Shame on me, if I were to leak and ooze
                                Staining your fingers tomato-orange
                                Would your face twist in disgust?
                                Would you throw me out with the trash?
                                I have beauty still, and my shape yet holds
                                Place me on your table, a centrepiece
                                I am not too broken
                                To be there
                                To hold
                                Your love

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                                @Tattie You’ve taken that in a beautiful direction

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                                • slowtiger@berlin.socialS slowtiger@berlin.social

                                  @brianbilston

                                  I see you forgot the fabric softener again
                                  I'm not angry, just disapointed
                                  I will just look without speaking
                                  at the trousers, standing in the corner

                                  (this of course is an echo to "Lederhosensaga" by Börries Freiherr von Münchhausen, https://krautjunker.com/2023/03/20/lederhosen-saga/, as a child I already had memorized the refrain "Geschlechter kommen, Geschlechter vergehen, hirschlederne Reithosen bleiben bestehen")

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                                  @slowtiger Wonderful!

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                                    @emmadavidson Ha ha! Good for you. Did many of them get spotted?

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                                    • brianbilston@mastodon.onlineB brianbilston@mastodon.online

                                      Having a clear out of first lines for poems I shall never write. Please help yourself to any of these.

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                                      @brianbilston I might set these to music, using only these first lines and no other text, with the page numbers as number of bars. Will make a nice challenge (especially the 78 one).

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                                      • slowtiger@berlin.socialS slowtiger@berlin.social

                                        @brianbilston

                                        That my dear, is a diphthong
                                        to keep your fingers clean
                                        just grab the chipth with the thongs
                                        and dip it in the thaltha.

                                        (Title "The lithping Mexican")

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                                        @slowtiger 🙂

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                                        • annasaultron@nerdculture.deA annasaultron@nerdculture.de

                                          @brianbilston

                                          Oi! Oi!

                                          Oi!
                                          Oi?
                                          Oi! Oi!!
                                          OI! OI?!
                                          OI?!! OI!!?
                                          Oi! oi...
                                          oi oi..
                                          oi... oi?!
                                          OI!!!
                                          oi? oi???
                                          oi!!!
                                          oi... oi?!?
                                          Oi?
                                          Oi??
                                          OI?
                                          OI!!
                                          OI!!! OI!!!
                                          oI... Oi...
                                          oI...
                                          OI...

                                          Silently they wept.

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                                          @AnnaSaultron That’s a work of beauty, Anna

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